Alien stories

QES this is a great thread.I wish more people would take it seriously though.Quick guys come with some stories before this thread disappear's.

ninXeno426

Thanks for bumping this thread.

All, I apologize if this is a repeat, but I tried this on my own thread and it seems more appropriate here. I think we should all go for it and not wait to polish ideas too much because then they will never be posted. With that said, here is my start for good or ill:

I have seen a lot of talk about people writing scripts but no examples. I have no idea how to do one but here is my first attempt and I completely expect ridicule.

However, if anyone finds any value and wants to run with it, by all means, do! Here is the background:

It is me interviewing people about AC- particularly about the assumption that Shaw is the victim of devious deeds. Again, please know I have never attempted this and I kept it clean as possible. (takes breath) here goes:

ALIEN SOUTHERN STYLE-

I

Hello, I am DK, proud member of what I call the Scified Collective. New footage of Alien Covenant has been released and I spoke with some people afterwards about it. Here were there comments:

DK- So what do you think of how Shaw is portrayed in this movie?

Anonymous 1- Well, DK, I think it is just wrong to see a youngish woman put through a situation like this just to punish her for saying that she deserves to know why some lily white manly looking man got woken up sleeping through the crack of noon. Maybe he would have answered her question if that other old fart didn’t interrupt her or if she woke him up to the smell of bacon cooking on an iron frying pan….He didn’t seem to have any laundry she could have washed for him.

Anonymous 2- Well, DK my friend and brother, she gave birth to a new generation. It looked pretty painful, but she sacrificed that pain for her beliefs. Conveniently, it is easier for me to empathize being male and all not having ever to had go through that myself, but you get my drift, right DK?

Anonymous 3- Why did Ripples flame all dem dere eggs? They didn’t do nothin’ wrong! They was just mindin’ their own bisness and got burned! They all deserved a meaningful life like anyone else!

DK: Okay, how do we raise these new human killing parasites who you say deserve to be born?

Anonymous 3- I just mind my bisness. That’s about personally responsibility and guvment!

DK: Umm…OK, but those things don’t seem to know or care about those concepts.

Anonymous 3- (grabs a broom): Get them li’l bass t$rds away from me ya hear? Call the Army! (Shuts and locks door- all 5 locks).

Anonymous 4- Those critters creep me out, DK! I heard scrithin’s comin’ from the garage the other night and found a shredded bag of cat food the ne next morning! I saw one in my back yard just this mornin’ and shot with my 12 gauge when it gave me the stink eye! It started steamin’ and bubblin’ like porin’ lighter fluid on an open fire (when I thought it was a fire extinguisher)! It burnt a hole and ended up in my ceptic tank- sendin’ all kinds of the nasty into the air! I’ waiting for a HAZMAT team right now and…..did you see dat? Dare it is! Here it come! I gotta reload I’m out os sh(gags as the facehugger jumps him).

DK- Well, we can see that these creatures are certainly causing troubles in our inner cities and we await more guidance. However, our wild cat problem has diminished and for that, we are thankful. Back to you, Chris!

II

Good evening, this is DK reporting from the deep south at an undisclosed location. I am here in the woods with Festus who is dealing with the face huggers in the tradition of the back woods survivalist.

Festus, How are you? How are you managing with the face hugger problem out here?

Festus:

Well DK, these critters they call face huggers been around a few months now and those city folk can’t handle NUTTIN! Damn social sevice thumb suckin’ cry babies! Now, you gots to be practical livin’ out here in the back 40. Do we like these face huggers? HELL NO! Do we deal with them? You know it brutha!

Ya see, We catch ‘em- not sayin’ how- what matters is they get caught! Now- you get yoself a nice a big ol’ pot of boilin’ water with some Cajun spices, onions, corn on the cob and some lye to counteract that acid blood, and you got yo self some of the best creole this side of the Mississip, yessir!

Take note people.We should all follow his lead guys.You never know till you try.

OK. Here is one for the Isolation fans and those whom insist on zero humor:

Amanda Ripley here. I need to access the computer to gain an access code. The computer is 20 feet away and the save point is 30 feet away. I have been crouching my way through hoping to be silent.

 I cannot remember the last time I ate or drank, but know that I am tired, hungry, emotionally and physically exhausted.  There is a synthetic impeding my path to the computer and I could make quick work of it with my shotgun. Doing so would likely alert the Alien and add complication to my current complicated situation.

 I have been sitting under this table for what feels like an eternity and I must act. Saving my progress trumps computer access. The synthetic walks away-my opportunity. As I make my move, I hear my motion scanner sound off that something is near. I mush on toward the all-important save point. It is so close! 

My quick moves have alerted the synthetic and I hear fast footsteps in the ducts above. Too late to hide. The save point is all important. As I reach it, I hear the Alien exit the ducts and also hear the synthetic inform me that I appear hysterical and should calm down. Footsteps from the Alien can be heard approaching from the hall. I insert my card into the save point.  It beeps……the synthetic drones on telling me I am not authorized to be in this area…….the footsteps get faster and louder……..I am utterly defenseless………unless that save card registers in time. Regardless, I am currently scared sh1tless.

ALIEN Haiku:

Face hugger draws near

There is no escape for me

Can’t breathe, it’s over

Alright guys this is my own shot at Alien fiction.Much like dk i was a little disappointed in the lack of results in the Alien story thread.By doing this i hope it inspires some of you guys to try as well.After all what have you got to loose?Note this is a work in progress,i will update it as often as i can and any feedback will also be appreciated.So here goes.This is set any where from five to ten years after the events of Aliens and Alien 3.The incident on LV-426 has been covered up,and the incident on Fiorina-161 has been swept under the rug.On a planet designated DH-168,a team have settled on the planet and are in the early stages of prepping the planet to be terraformed.I should say i don't know much about terraforming,or what kind professional fields it requires so for know i won't probably go to much into there specific professions.More on this later.

ninXeno426

Good start! Maybe you could tease us with a short dialogue between characters or describe the scene? Thanks for jumping in. This thread has high potential and lots of fun!

I'll do my best.Alright Here's a sample .Reynolds"Captain I've found something I think you should see."                                         Collins"What is it Karen."                   Reynolds"Well it looks like an egg of somekind.Its better if you just see it."The captain inspects the egg from a safe distance clearly wary of the lifeform inside.Collins"Mitchell have you seen anything like it?" Derek Mitchell,a former marine who has been to more world's than he cares to remember,has been silently observing from of to the side."No and I've seen enough lets leave it the f@&k alone!"                    Karen Reynolds"Mitchell,it's just an egg."                                                 Mitchell"It's a big f@&king egg,and i personally don't want to stick around and find whatever layed it!" Reynolds"Such a big baby,and i don't think there's much chance of that.I think they've been here a long time.Captain i would like to take one back and run some tests."Mitchell"Are you f@&king crazy!"Reynolds"No I'm not this is a pretty significant mind.Captain?"  Captain Collins"Granted.I'll inform Sonya to prep it for decontamination."                               Mitchell"Captain you can't be serious.You really want bring this back?"                                                    Collins"I am serious.Sonya do you copy?"                                                   Sonya,an android"I hear you Captain."                                               Collins"Stand by with the decontam unit,we've found something."

Nice! I look forward to the net scene.

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The topic of this story was both created and inspired by ninXeno426

Background: A female  appearing synthetic observes a death and is told from the synthetic’s POV.

The Container:

I tried to communicate to Steve that I was not interested in his emotional and sexual advances. I suppose I could not entirely blame him since he was unaware that I am not human. Oddly, Mr. Weyland designed my physique to match my intelligence.

Steve could not take my polite hints of rejection but persisted with his advances. Our mission was to bring back a live specimen for the company. With a dwindling crew during our ordeal, I found Steve to be the perfect one to serve that purpose. Steve had an unusual view of sexuality. For him, it was more about the buildup than the act itself.

I placed a face hugger in a container in my bedroom (I didn't need a bedroom, but needed to maintain a living space like the humans as not to cause suspicion). I invited Steve to my quarters and told him the container contained a rare aphrodisiac that would change his life forever. I was actually telling the truth (mostly).

He obliged and the face hugger wasted no time. I had never seen a spectacle like this before. The raw meeting of predator and prey fascinated me and I wished to study that aspect more. I was simply unaware at that point of how a human could roll, kick and scratch while a face hugger calmly and effortlessly embraced its prey. But for now, my directive was to deliver a specimen back to the company.

As Steve's struggle waned, I knelt beside him and whispered into his ear "Thank you for helping me  help you  help me."

fin

Well done!Thank you dk!

Alright i think someone else should give this a shot.

"The oldest and strongest emotion of mankind is fear.And the oldest and strongest kind of fear is fear of the unknown."- H.P Lovecraft                                                                           In my first part i detailed a scene regarding a small group dicovering a lone egg.What i didn't elaborate on is how they found it in the first place.Let first start by saying that this planet has a very harsh climate.Due to it's rotation the planet's average day/night cycle can last days.The nights are particularly hostile with temperatures reaching forty below zero.The planet itself is a barren wasteland populated by endless gray sanded deserts.I should also note that this group if settlers are not the first to have been on the planet,They're actually a relief crew.The previous crew's job was to simply set up shop begin,consruct facilities for the relief crew to begin testing the planet to see if it's suitable to be terraformed.Upon arrival the team traverse's the terrain in what i like to call "The Big Rig".It's basically a giant mobile drilling platform.Various  members of the team,which is comprised of ten members,are out scouting when they discover a giant fissure with minor life signs reading from inside.That's were we find our three,Captain Collins,Derek Mitchell,and Karen Reynolds.They've been lowered into the fissure using a lift from the big rig's crane.Upon reaching the bottom they find a small system of interconnected tunnels that appear to be unnatural in origin,as if they've tunneled by something long ago.It is after going through these tunnels,some of which are so small they can only be crawled through,that they stumble across a small  chamber,seemingly empty except for this lone egg.How did it get there?How long has it been there?Why is there only one?

I would really like to hear the rest of your story NinXeno426 and I am still working on my script of Alien: Isolation. can't wait to hear from you :)

I will be including in my version of Alien: isolation the egg morph and try to explain how the "Queen" DNA came to be ;)

Movie fan i think it'll be ready by tonight.

Alien 5 ending scenes. Act i wrotte 1 hour ago on other comment section and dk advised to post here. I can do much better..i am gonna writte a full alien 5 plot after ac. But in meantime read the very rough concept of the ending scene.

Ripley upon ultimate disaster...looks at newt and lets her enter the escape shuttle...the door closes and a glass window stands between them..newt realise rilpley didnt enter. And looks at her shocked.ripley in sorrow says.

"you have to live,you are the only one alive that knows what happened here you have to destroy weyland yutani,their agenda will eradicate our race newt and i must stay here thats the only way i know this ends"

"ripley you cant do this ,you cant die,i cant do this alone!there must be another way!dont do this!"

with admiration and pride ripley looks at newt with a tear dropping

"I remember a little girl that survived against all odds and became a hero ,you can and you will newt,im counting on you,our race depends on it, you must survive,and i will finish what i started"

"ripley dont do it! I will stay with you we will kill them together and we go together,you saved me once let me help you!"

Newt is covered in tears ,and anger with ripley sacrifice,

Ripley faces newt with a tear escaping her eye but smilling

"i dont need help to where im going , i didnt save you, you saved me newt i will kill them all , promise me you will take care of wy little girl, you will allways be my little girl" 

Comformed with ripley decision,she is now aware theres no turning back,she could see in her eyes,commitment of a true hero that will sacrifice her life for the human race,and for herself.

"i promise, you will allways be a mother to me,end this morherfukers once and for all"

ripley mans up and puts her hero face with strong conviction and rage

"i will! Take care my little girl"

Sorrow takes over as ripley  press the button sending newt in a safety shuttle

She turns around with her special suit, engineer weapon...going towards the center of the hive to activate manually the self destruction sequence to blow off the facilities in space.

As she reaches the hive destroying some xenos in the way everything looks calm, a subtle silence pairs in the zone, she looks at the dead gutted alien king(created by wy scientist as ultimate weapon for war purposes and realsed upon the hive to contain the queen)

From the shadows of a dark passage...the huge head with scars emerge...slowly...looking at ripleys eyes..step by step the huge body appears as she growls..imponent,majestically

Ripley looks at her with courage ,bravely as a true hero..

" we meet again you bitch, but today i aint running away, i will kill every single one of you motherfukers!"

Ripley is dodging the attacks she gets her leg slashed but manages to gut the queen with the engineer tech gun wy made..the queen falls?.as she growls  a sos towards close drones and warriors ..ripley walks towards the button to activate the bombs..with the difficulty she sits on the ground next to it..looks at the helpless queen...

" yes call them you bitch, i aint running tonight i will send you all to hell.."

xenos starting to appear surrounding ripley...as she presses the button in a hero posture and all her splendor.

Booom...

Newt watching the explosion and looking at a wy logo (wy vs newt spinoff).

Post credit engineer ship appearing carrying what seems to be ripley body..putting it dowm on a altar and kneeling towards it as a omage..closing in flamboyant fashion..alien 1 music starts.

People cry and go nuts applauding.

I know i would.

Looking forward to reading more Tiago.

Part 2                                                                                                                     The team has safely moved the egg to the big rig in the decontam unit.The egg seemingly inert after untold generations of slumber.In a small lab aboard the big rig the egg is being examined by Sonya,the projects synthetic.The egg itself being kept in a sterilization chambers.Along with Sonya is the Chief science officer,Michael Willits,and Dr.Karen Reynolds .Captain James Collins observes from the relative safety of a moniter room.He hits the intercom.                       Collins"Willits have you ever seen anything like it?"                                  Willits"I don't think anyone's seen anything like it.Not in over 300 surveyed worlds.I honestly don't know what to make of it."                 Reynolds"Captain.Id like permission to open it up."                 Collins"Are all the quarantine procedures set up?"                           Reynolds"Yes Captain."                     Collins"Then go ahead."                     Near by with the captain are Derek Mitchell and Nora Chambers,project engineering.       "I'll bet it'll  just be a big f@&king omelette."                                             Chambers"I'll take that bet.Your on Mitchell."                                          Willits begins to make an incision at the top of the egg.           Reynolds"Careful Willits."                 Willits"I am.Hand me the forceps Sonya."Sonya hands him the forceps and he begins to pry it open.                                                   Chambers"Alright here's moment of truth.Get ready to pay up Mitchell."                                               Collins"Quiet you two!Willits whats inside?"                                                 Willits"A fleshy substance of some kind.It appears to be covering something."                                          Mitchell"Like i said a f@&king omelette.Some discovery."               Chambers"No Mitchell,there's clearly something in there.You wouldn't be trying to weasel your way out now would ya?"                    Mitchell"No especially since i just basically won."                                    Collins"You two shut the f@&k up or leave.Willits whats in there?"        Willits"There seems to some kind of life form.."                                Collins"Dr. Reynolds stand by.Be ready to purge the specimen if necessary."                                           Reynolds"With all due respect captain,Im afraid i can't do that.I mean this is unprecedented.I think the company might want see this"  Willits"Captain im inclined to agree with her.If the specimen is alive,there's limitless potential for what we can learn from it."                It is in this moment the creature within the egg begins to stir.Willits and Reynolds step back.Sonya remains where she is.                         Collins"Willits what's going on?"   Willits"Well captain our guest seems to be alive after all."                 Mitchell"No f@&king way!"              Chambers"Captain i don't like this."                                                      Mitchell"What's not to like.You just won the bet"                                 Chambers"F@&k the bet!Captain i don't think we're ready for this."     Collins"Agreed.Willits at the first signs of hostility i want it destroyed do you hear me?"             The thing in the egg stirs once again.Willits steps in for a closer inspection.                                            Reynolds"Careful Willits."                 The fleshy substance that concealed the creature begins to peel back.Willits inches closer.        Willits"Captain this is really quite extraordinary."                                     The egg peels back one final time.Something in the egg springs out.Reynolds screams.Sonya stands quiet,emotionless.Willits never knew what hit him.He falls to the ground unconscious,with an alien lifeform attached to his face.

Great stories, here will be the basic plot of the beginning scene for Alien: Isolation 

An exploration ship with a crew of 6 descends upon an unknown planet, one of the crew will get face-hugged the ship gets off the planet, unfortunately the alien bursts out the victim's chest and one by one they all die...

10 years later the colonization vessel: Sevastopol stumbles across a ship floating through space.

This was just a preview, but I will soon release the full story with all the details ;)