Alien stories

BLACKWINTER-WITCH - You are most welcome. I certainly hope you find these pieces to your liking. :)

Oh, gosh! I am such an oaf! I have accidentally placed the first interval twice (the second time being within the 2nd Interval)! I will rectify this! I am so sorry. :(

Something Real

Just got to the point where Jacob is conversing with the android after waking up.

It flows very well, the phrasing and such as well as the details immediately create a solid mental imagery and a sense of depth even this early into the story!

BLACKWINTER-WITCH - I am quite pleased you have found it to your likeing thus far. I have rectified the mistake I made earlier when I accidentally linked the First Interval twice. I am terribly sorry if it created trouble.

Something Real

NP, found 2nd Interval with a look at your Topics, I'll re-post the links here, a favor in exchange for the very enjoyable story you worked on and have shown to us. :)

ALIEN: Endymion

ALIEN: Endymion (2nd Interval)

ALIEN: Endymion (3rd Interval)

BLACKWINTER-WITCH - Oh, thank you! That is an exceedingly kind favor; I greatly appreciate your assistance in this matter. In the future, I will be more observant while creating links. :)

Something Real

You're quite welcome! :) I saw it as a way to repay the favor of posting your stories and To Err Is Human, after all. :)

BLACKWINTER-WITCH - Thank you for your understanding and patience. :)

See everyone? THIS is how this thread should be working!

Something Real

You're welcome :)

dk

Agreed!

DK - I do not understand what you are pointing out. Has something gone wrong? :(

Something Real No. I just haven't seen cool and positive exchanges like this for a while.

DK - Oh! Hahaha! I understand. Forgive my misunderstanding. Do not worry; I will not engage in negative interactions if I am capable of avoiding them. I greatly prefer friendly discourse; it is most agreeable. :)

Something Real

Just finished ALIEN: Endymion (3rd Interval) and I VERY much enjoyed this story!!!

...and I admit I am hoping for more. :) BUT, that is NOT meant to be 'pressure' merely a statement of appreciation from desire for more. :)

BLACKWINTER-WITCH - Your expression of enjoyment for the story I presented is extremely valuable to me - and the reason why I write and tell stories. I have considered creating another chapter; however, I was not certain if anyone would be interested. Perhaps in the near future I will do so as a result of your interest. Regardles, I thank you humbly for your kind words. :)

@Something Real 

I've read the first interval of Endymion and will read the rest later tonight. Wow you have really captured the gritty pragmatic attitude of the Alienverse, well done. I look forward to reading the next interval.  

IRAPTUS - Your enjoyment is the highest form of praise. I certainly hope you find the remainder of the series to your liking. :)

Something Real

I'm glad that my thoughts on your work brightened your day! As to your future works, as-and-when the Muse and mood come and lend inspiration...that's how writers and writing works, yes?

Thank-you again for the very enjoyable trip to the ALIENverse and you are quite welcome! :)

IRaptus

Endymion and Dark Horizon I think you'll agree are both really good works and the respective authors genuinely capture the 'feel' of the ALIENverse!!

BLACKWINTER-WITCH - Hahaha! Indeed. My muse is a fickle and often capricious creature. However, the fact that it helps to bring enjoyment to others is reason enough for me to continuing putting up with its unending knavery. :)

Something Real

Oh, so is mine!! The Muse is a VERY whimsical beastie!! I know such well! I also put up with mine, for the same reasons. :)